Here's something Yoni wrote on the topic of "Spring."
Outside, spring reveals itself. The ground is moist and green from the earlier rain, while clouds still swirl and hover like menacing birds. Trees have begun to sprout their leaves and blossoms. The bark is rough against my back as I lean against the tree to rest.
I close my eyes and hear the sounds of spring: the sizzle of hot dogs and burgers on a grill, the trickle of water from a stream - and finally, the peaceful chirping of birds in the distance.
Yoni, I really like the sensory details of this piece, and your word choice is very specific. Some words that stand out for me are swirl, sizzle, and trickle. Nice!
Here's something Yoni wrote on the topic of "Spring."
ReplyDeleteOutside, spring reveals itself. The ground is moist and green from the earlier rain, while clouds still swirl and hover like menacing birds. Trees have begun to sprout their leaves and blossoms. The bark is rough against my back as I lean against the tree to rest.
I close my eyes and hear the sounds of spring: the sizzle of hot dogs and burgers on a grill, the trickle of water from a stream - and finally, the peaceful chirping of birds in the distance.
Yoni, I really like the sensory details of this piece, and your word choice is very specific. Some words that stand out for me are swirl, sizzle, and trickle. Nice!
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